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Oddly colored hair (naturally or dyed) ie: blue, pink, streaked hair, "bottle red" (Think Rihanna)


Oddly colored eyes (and colored contacts) ie: red, yellow, pink, COLOR-CHANGING EYES


Unnaturally beautiful characters, ie: perfect proportions and complexions, etc.


Being an animagus or a metamorphous  (meta is very, very rare and ani is hard to achieve and  you have to be registered)


Being a half-breed creature, ie: half-veela, half-vampire, half-werewolf (or a werewolf, for that matter)


Having your character self-harm, ie: cutting, popping pills, etc. (This is a very over-done thing in oc's, and it's frankly not something healthy)


Having them dress in clothing outside the time-period (do your research)*


Having them be goth/emo/scene (seriously over-done)


Giving them tattoo's and piercing (they go to a boarding school in Scotland, seriously guys)


As just a general statement; "Scene",  and "Emo" fashions didn't start up until the mid-to-late 2000's. Mind your time periods when creating characters.

    *Wizarding clothing is more of a Victorian-influenced style (according to the movies and books), Muggle clothing would be early 1990's to late 1990's



Romance:



Most clichéd romances for your oc to experience: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, Severus Snape, Remus Lupin, Sirius Black,  Fred and/or George Weasley, Ron Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Luna Lovegood, Ginny Weasley and Hermione Granger (basically, main characters. I'm not saying all of these romance stories are horrible. I've seen some wonderful ocxcanon pairings)


THE WORD OF JK ROWLING IS PRETTY FINAL; we know who marries who and who dies and such for the most part. Please stick to the storyline.


More clichés: having your oc sleep with a canon character, be raped by a canon character, dating/loving a teacher (anything past a crush), having a canon character's  baby, marrying a canon character, etc.


You can always make up your own love interest for the your oc, you can mold them into whatever you want and you're free to create your own storyline without having to worry about sticking exactly to the book.




Family and Friends:



Killing off your oc's parents is so overdone it's not even funny (~90% of all oc's I've seen are orphans)


Having Voldemort kill the parents is even more of a cliché


Having them grow up with horrible guardians or having them raise themselves is another big cliché


Having them be sexually/mentally/physically abused in their childhood is very cliché


IF THEY ARE THE TWIN OR THE SIBLING OF ANY CANON CHARACTER, THROW THE IDEA IN THE TRASH AND START AGAIN (seriously)


Having them be closely related to canon character's is commonly overdone as well


If you're making them pureblood, do a little family tree research. I looked alot at family trees and such, and it helped me understand relations much better



If they are the child of any of the following, throw the character out and start from scratch: Severus Snape, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, James Potter, Dumbledore, Voldemort and Hagrid



If they are friends with Draco Malfoy's crew then they are probably not going to hang out with the Golden Trio, and vice versa. It's just not very logical.

Hogwarts:



They are not on the Gryffindor Quidditch team while Harry Potter is attending school


No girls are on the Slytherin Quidditch team while Harry Potter is at school


YOU CANNOT USE ELECTRONIC DEVICES IN HOGWARTS


Uniform violations are getting to be ridiculous (check out my uniform guides for info, posted below)


  No wands with Phoenix feather cores


Giving them a wolf/dolphin patronus is very overdone (no mythical creatures as well, like dragons and unicorns)


They cannot have a pet at school that is not an owl, a cat, a toad or a rat

Transfer students would be very unlikely (American and Japanese transfer students are so overdone)



Houses:



Gryffindor:

possible the most clichéd house, "Brave, loyal, sometimes stupidly courageous, etc." Colors are Red/Gold, Boys cannot be in Girl's dorms.

Typically the "good" house, where all the heroes and heroines are. They might tragically die during the Battle of Hogwarts and then are later brought back to life.


Slytherin:

Another clichéd house, "ambitious, cunning, etc.", Silver/Green colors, very blood-purist.


Typically, this is the "bad" house, full of the party girls/boys and the "rough" crowd. This is a split when it comes to the Battle of Hogwarts though. Either they're Death Eaters or they fight with the good guys and  almost die for a canon-character (usually Harry or Draco). Usually labeled as "misunderstood and emo/goth".


Ravenclaw:

not as clichéd but it has it's few sues. Usually portrayed as the "nerd" house because it's full of intellectuals and people who love to learn. Colors are Blue and Bronze in the book and Blue and Silver in the movies.

Hufflepuff:

The least-clichéd house. Very underrated house full of loyal, hardworking students.  Colors are Yellow and Black.

There are no other houses at Hogwarts besides these four, unless you count the fictional Mary-Sue house of  SparklyPoo (:

Okay, before everyone get's all up in arms over this let me just say that these are stereotypical things that I've seen. Just because your character has one of these traits doesn't mean I'm calling them a Mary Sue. My oc, Merope actually has a trait or two of the ones I've listed above, as does her love interest, Phineas.
Here are some tidbits to follow up on:


Hogwarts Uniform Guide: [link]

A Mary Sue Limitus test: [link]

A list of Pureblood families:
[link]
if anyone want's me to add something to this list, please tell me (:
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AbsentMindDeviant Featured By Owner Edited 3 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Here's a few things I think  might make my OC a stu.

He is an Arabian transfer student from North Africa

His name is Laith Minyar, Arabic for Lion of Dawn

His patronus is a lion

I think his house is obvious

He also uses a flying carpet rather than a broom, although he own one

He hails from a long family line if treasure hunters, that's why he can be count as one of the rich students

He love setting things on fire

He knows how to cast the torture curse, but never used it on a humanoid target before

So what do you think?
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Melacollina Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You do realize that this is fanfiction, correct? Which means that the writer can alter the story to suit their needs? If we wanted to read about Harry Potter ... We'd read the books. Some people want to explore the world of Hogwarts through different eyes and that does not mean they have to follow the plot of the books/movies to a tee. It's boring; we know what happens.

I don't like OCs that are Mary Sues but I don't have a problem with someone switching the story to suit their needs (ie. a character falling for Snape or Dumbledore).
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takanahyuga Featured By Owner Edited Aug 26, 2014
i meeean... if a person has an OC they can make their own story n all, i agree with most of your points but putting an OC in a story already changes the plot and some may want to leave the whole idea unchanged but some may want to put something of theirs to the story, but that story is already theirs. ALSO why cant the OC have a wand with phoenix feather core??? Having a wand with phoenix feather core isnt all that rare, maybe cliche a little BUT i have seen tons of people with phoenix feather core on Pottermore and its not like they chose that wand. THE WAND CHOOSES THE WIZARD, not the other way around
(apologies for any mistakes i have made, english isnt my native language)
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xXx-Kuo-Yi-xXx Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  New member  Traditional Artist
Well, my Gryffindor OC Ruby is seven years younger than the Golden Trio and isn't related to any of the canon characters and certainly didn't fall enough with a main character, she isn't a teacher's favorite either due to always getting into mischief and doing naughty things or playing tricks on the teachers she doesn't like. She grew out of this when she got older, but when she was younger she was a little childish sometimes and too mischievous for her own good. Let's see....brown braids, brown eyes, she's not an orphan. So far so good, I suppose. Meow :3 
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Lady-Brazil Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I completely agree ^^ 
although with the half veela I wouldn't call it Mary Sue. It's not uncommon and has been said that veelas have married wizards and have had half breed children. Where they get their magical ability from their father and / or their beauty from their mother. Although it's not as common as pure bloods and muggleborns etc

But the way you described it that Gryffindor and Slytherin are theultimate Cliché houses. Although most people put their OCs in those houses, I wouldn't class them as Cliché Just the Mary Sue character put in them that ruin it 

other than that it's spot on! (I hate when people don't follow the dress code aswell XD) 
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RailgunCz Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
oh yeah, you forgot something: a character whose name is a normal but a mispelled name (like Katie to Kayteeh) 

And I want to ask? What if the character is related to a very minor character? Like a cousin of marcus flint or millicent bulstrode??
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RigelIsUnappreciated Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Um, hi. Meow :3 

I'm a bit new to the world of making fan-characters, so OF COURSE I took it upon myself to make my first Harry Potter OC the most difficult-to-pull-off character I could think of.

She's a crossover character, so of course there's got to be rule-bending, and although I really like her, I'm a bit insecure about whether she's a Sue or not. If it isn't too much trouble, would you mind giving her a glance-over? I'm just not sure how much I can bend the rules of HP magic to accommodate the other world she's part of. I don't mind seriously revising or anything....

So, just tell me if your okay with it, and I'll start barfing all of my OC goodness (or badness) up on here, 'kay?I am a dummy! 
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SpectrumHugh Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Another  thing you could put is if the canon character their paired with finds them singing a song related to their life, like, I saw a fanfic where an oc was singing " I'm not okay" by MCR, and Harry walked in. I thought that was cute, but then I saw like 50 more of them and it got a bit overdone : P, not saying anything against fan fictions that do that but, it is a bit cliché : P 
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stars-shine-bright94 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That is definitely a common thing within fan fictions, I've seen some where songs are incorporated in a good way but it's important to remember things like the songs fitting the timeline (i.e., MCR wouldn't be around in Harry's time at Hogwarts).
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SpectrumHugh Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's what I thought, too. Thanks for clarifying, though.
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